Change in film idea (planning)

Unfortunately, due to difficulties with casting we found it too difficult to produce our film with the original storyline in which we pitched to our peers. Instead we then ran with my own idea which was titled "Bittersweet Demise" below. We of-course adapted this to fit our own specifications and acting abilities which led us to produce our short film titled 'The Love Triangle'. The story follows a traditional flash-back narrative in that it begins at the very end of the film then the rest of the scenes chronologically follow one another in the lead-up to the penultimate scene. This choice of narrative creates an enigma and is useful as it is relatively simple. Below is the planning I did for the love triangle


It is a variation on a theme for the planning I did for my initial idea. :