Audience feedback

This is the video my group produced when responding to audiecne feedback

One Idea for coursework piece + RESEARCH FOR FILM

Prior to producing our short film, I wanted to do some investigation into how my narrative will flow and what general theme I can use. I decided to go for one which is a simple idea in theory. However as my film will be at a maximum length of 5 minutes, a simple narrative will be the most effective as the audience will have a chance to grasp the concept of the film. My idea was to feature a day in the life of one person, a day in which everything goes right and they have felt the happiest they have in their entire life. However my film is to end in tragedy with this person dying. The audience should hopefully be left with mixed feelings of both sorrow yet an undeniable feeling of joy due to the brilliance of the person's day. My inspiration for the film stemmed from a video from Just Jack titled "The Day I Died".

The Day I Died-Just Jack (Music Video)Just Jack

I intend to replicate the theme of the video but change the narrative completely to make this film completely original. I created a Prezi to help develop my thoughts and help make some ground in the preparation of the film -

Bittersweet Demise on Prezi

For example, this scene in Kick Ass epitomizes the comedic element that could be instored via the use of a voice over and non diegetic sound RESEARCH One example of a film with a love triangle in it- Another example